Story help?! Creative writers needed!?

I don't wanna be mean, but I will. Your story sounds a bit over done. Vampires, coming back from the dead, werewolves, etc. I love to write too but unfortunately I'm not great at it and my ideas also suck. Here's an idea that you can stick in your story: Instead of having her hunted by hunters, have her fall in love with a pale, humor-challenged skinny white guy (lets call him edward). Then she finds out he's a vamp and, walla!, you have yourself a winner!